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Test wallpaper

Post by Legolas_ » Fri Apr 13, 2007 5:19 am

Here is yet another test with tanks. Please critisize this test.
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Post by Hannibal » Fri Apr 13, 2007 5:33 am

Stick a ground in there, with a background as well. Maybe mountains, or just a sky for a backdrop..but not anything too distracting. But I haven't tried modeling a thing, so..
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Bacground plz

Post by Palomides » Fri Apr 13, 2007 2:34 pm

When I went to my first art class, before anything else I was taught (our first subject was a pumpkin) never to draw the great floating pumpkin. Please, please, please make a background for it. Lots of white space is very unappealing.

EDIT: BTW, my friend Smiles says, when asked, that it sucks. When asked for good criticism, he said it sucks. However, that is his reaction to almost everything, so...
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Post by ducktape » Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:13 pm

It would be nice to have a ground and sky. but it would be kool to have some bullets somewhere. maybe from the purple tank shotting the Z and it Rico'ing off.
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Post by Davy Jones » Fri Apr 13, 2007 4:50 pm

nice, it needs some background, some ground, and a little more lighting effects
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Post by Legolas_ » Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:15 am

Davy, please post something somebody hasnt allready said.

Im working on the ground texture as we speak

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Post by Legolas_ » Sat Apr 14, 2007 5:45 am

Here we go, with a ground and a sky.
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Post by ducktape » Sat Apr 14, 2007 5:47 am

wow thats awesome. I would be nice to have some clouds. but other then that GJ!
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Post by Legolas_ » Sat Apr 14, 2007 5:55 am

clouds, hmm.. ill think about it

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Post by Grace F » Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:39 am

It doesn't look like the shadow coming from the BZ, and the shadow from the purple tank match up.....perhaps it's just me.

But yea, with the clouds, I don't know if ducktape just wanted clouds above the tanks. But I'd like to see the clouds around the arena - meaning it looks like the map is in the clouds.
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Post by CannonBallGuy » Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:05 pm

The shadows look fine to me, not bad Legolas_.
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Post by MLC 1 » Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:03 pm

How Bout the moutains but really close so it looked like the were right in front of it. or clouds
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Post by Palomides » Sat Apr 14, 2007 7:55 pm

I think I see that the shadows are imperfect. Perhaps your light source is too close.

Instead of clouds, you could probably get away with a gradient for the sky.

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Post by Kesnar » Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:09 pm

It's awesome.Legolas_ you know how to make this things great.
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Post by Legolas_ » Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:22 am

Thank you, please give me ideas for a new wallpaper!

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Re: Test wallpaper

Post by joevano » Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:35 am

Legolas_ wrote:Here is yet another test with tanks. Please critisize this test.
No ideas, but here is the criticism that you asked for:

It's spelled 'criticize', not 'critisize'. ;)

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Post by Legolas_ » Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:00 pm

Thx, donny ill remember that... its spelled critisize, not criticize... got it.

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Post by CannonBallGuy » Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:38 pm

Well, it's "criticise" if you ask a limey.
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Post by Simba » Sun Apr 22, 2007 1:00 am

n1 lego_.


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